by Robert Sep 16, 2004
category :
Life, society /
other
In packs we travel from place to place |
by miss scooby
WOW...the decriptions within each line was flawless. and not to mention the topic you chose to write on. I am impressed that you chose a topic such as this and contrasted it bewteen 2 things. ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT |
by ~*Ley*~
you got a thing with animals. i think its interesting. because all animal life is human life at its most primal. what we learn from animals we can learn from ourselves. like this one for example made me think of our strong family ties, and our pride in ourselves. its very interesting subjects. which makes your poems interesting. good job. keep up the good work. |
Great poem! 5.0 ♥ |
by VampyraKiâ€
Another Great poem |
by Emilia
very good poem... I voted a 5 =D |