good job. well written. 5/5 ~keep it up~

-no more

not that bad..haha i gave it a five out of five..keep it up

shannon<33

Great job. Very well written. You pick good things to write about also, not very tipical topics! Keep it up!

very good poem... I voted a 5 =D

Another Great poem

Great poem! 5.0 ♥

you got a thing with animals. i think its interesting. because all animal life is human life at its most primal. what we learn from animals we can learn from ourselves. like this one for example made me think of our strong family ties, and our pride in ourselves. its very interesting subjects. which makes your poems interesting. good job. keep up the good work.
~Freak~

WOW...the decriptions within each line was flawless. and not to mention the topic you chose to write on. I am impressed that you chose a topic such as this and contrasted it bewteen 2 things. ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT
take care always 5/5
Scooby

P.S. I have a long list to go LOL