Happy Valentine : This Mistake of Mine

by ntv650   Sep 16, 2004


With a face that glows,
A voice that sings,
With hands that caress,
And eyes that beam,
You enter the room and smile at me.

I watch you, my eyes wide in awe,
Catching my breath as you glide along the floor,
You speak little, but say all the more.
A lady of such magic that my eyes are sore,
So fair and so fine!
That I tremble when I ask...will you be my Valentine?

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With a face that lingers,
A voice that screams,
With hands that scar,
And eyes that cant dream ,
You enter the room and command me.

I hate you, and these eyes that you ignore,
Watching your step as you stride along the floor,
You speak too much, but it means nothing at all.
A lady of such darkness that my eyes are raw,
So evil and such a lie!
That Im glad to say at long last...Im happy your not mine!

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  • 19 years ago

    by ntv650

    Wow, had so much feedback for this. Thanks people :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessx3

    I liked how you took two inverse things and combined them together to make a great poem! Very unique :)

  • 20 years ago

    by kim kilner

    Sorry things didnt work out.
    Great poem!

  • 20 years ago

    by Lauraballz

    GO YOU!!!! I LOVE THESE POEMS!!! LOL!!! REAL GREAT COMEBACKS!!!! WELL DONE!! :P IF I EVER SEE HER... ARGHH!!! SHE IS GONNA GET IT BIG TIME!!! LOL!