General Triel

by МÅťťђĕш Яĕĩŋĕßĕřg   Sep 16, 2004


Leader of the Shaldor Army is General Triel.
Commanding all the soldiers in this ageless war.
In past times, he fought and watched as many enemies fell
Beneath his blade, the enchanted blade, the sword called Baldekor.
His armor is the subject of a wizened wizard's spell.
No one can strike him down, he is legend as they tell.
He commands his forces against the mighty Arok'Kahl.
Bold is he that leads the Imperial Army of Shaldor.
As the boiling battle rages he rides proud and tall,
Though he is a target, in the front he can do more.
"No one should lead from behind", he speaks to them all,
"I shall lead you soldiers to defeat the Arok'Kahl."

This is the leader of one of the two armies in my epic: Draconian War.

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  • 20 years ago

    by HJ

    Hey

    I have answered your question, in my comment box of "Dark Angel"

    Thanks for all your comments!

  • 20 years ago

    by HJ

    Hey

    I really enjoyed this piece. Pushes against the unknown boundaries with visionary passion. Inexorable paced.

    Please check out my work...Comment I'd be interested to read what you think.

    I have read your other work and really like your ellipitical style of writing.

    Kind regards
    Hayley

  • 20 years ago

    by Lucy

    what a start to a story, very nice

  • 20 years ago

    by МÅťťђĕш Яĕĩŋĕßĕřg

    I read Dark Hunter by GoldenKnight and I thought to myself, "Hey self, I think it might be a good idea to introduce the characters to everyone. In the epic (which I am still writing) the characters' personalities are revealed more through their actions and decisions.

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