Nice. Its very interesting, in my opinion how when someone loses faith an angel must give up its wings. It has a great flow to it as well. You have talent there.

its still awesome and i love it.. good work

This was a very creative piece. The way you twisted the ending was very intriguing...Good job!

youve done it again. your so talented, this one i can kidn of relate to. i love how your poems are so dark and fixed together. you should really submit them to somewhere big where everyone will read them caz i really think they should. keep writing,

Ah, yes Creative! I agree with them ^^^ I havent came across anything like this poem, and for that it makes it more the while. You did a great job hun. Thanks for the comment on my poem. Take Care, Jess xxxx

Excellent poem, you have probably been informed, but joe from this site stole this poem...