"And seeing her purged great physical attraction."
dude I think you want something synonmous to "caused" not purged...
"And after departing, they would contemplate their next meet."
mebbe more like "when they'll next meet" or something, you're using the word meet incorrectly there.
I liked the story poem, and I thought the ending was interesting because it added a special twist to the whole idea of the story.

Oh Aken... I love your work... Please write one for me about anything... I have fallen in love with your work.

nice kenny