Oh sniffle sniffle! That was so beautiful and sad at the same time! Wow you described those emotions with such perfection girl! Well done on a great write - thanks for sharing!
Luv Eirisa xxoo

Yeah im like 2 months late lol..i hope your still checking your comments!! I was going over some old comments on mine and came across yours..i thought i would return the favor..but man girl this was really really good!!! I mean it was like i could pitcure everything happening like you said and two girls crying and i absolutley love poems that do that! well i hope you get this because i loved this...abd dont stop writeing..i think you could really become something!! dont give up your talent this was awsome!! much love to you,
~Chelsey~

Hey gurla thanx for ur comment! That poem is sad but it's great... i will cry too the day i'll have to say goodbye to my best friend aka: dominican sis... i couldn't pictures my life w/ out her ( we r partnes in crime lol)... i hope u and ur best still talk cuz hey theres nutting like best friends.....
Great job! Ciao......

gosh girl you almost made me cry> it makes me remeber the last day i spent with my bestfriend b4 i moved. i miss her so dearly. Beautiful poem *Heather

Hey all of u!! It's been awhile but I just wanted to thank all of u for commentin on my poetry!! It means a lot to me and thanks Heather for all of ur encouragement!! Thank all of u for my comments, but a special thanks goes out to Heather b/c she even took the time to e-mail me and encourage me!! Thanks again!!

What's up ppl? I haven't been on here in awhile and just wanted to see what was up with everyone!! Heather, thanks again for all the encouragement...if i can, I'm gonna try to go pro!! lol that will prolly never happen!!