by Mass Murder Sep 17, 2004
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
I want things how they were before |
aww wow cute piece! hope things turned out good between you guys,the poem seemed to be coming from the heart:)beanxx |
by Leah20
That was okay, Check over your spelling more next time, and the use of "netspeak" (i.e u,2, w/e, stuff like that) really detracts from poetry and makes it flow worse. Keep it up, you have potential! |