It may look strange, as I have used a lot of names in this poem. Those names are the names of the Gods in different Myths. I wanted to relate this poem to any Myth. Legends are so interesting that I got stuck up learning about those. I selected very few names on a random basis. Sorry for such a long delay to produce the second part.
Sun God: Re
Gods of Love: Eros and Cupid
Goddesses of love: Aphrodite and Radha
God of fate: Orthwein and Shai

this was a really good poem. i love how u told a story so well in a poem so heartbreaking. i like how you told how this boy gave up everything for this girl, but was abandoned by her in the end. this story tells how alot of us feel when we encounter things like these through life