hmm, i'd like to go there someday. maybe to find myself... great poem, nice rhyming. take care:)

9th line: did you type PLACE 2x?

Your rhyming is awesome, another great one. Good work

Wow...i really wanna go to this place....beautiful...

This poem is very different from other's i've read in this category... i really liked it though....it's definitely original. good job.

When I first wrote this poem, I didnt really like it. I thought it was too long and too out of sync, but I guess it kind of grew on me. It's sequal is Il Castello Di Memorie if you'd like to read that. Its the same basic concept, just written a little later in my life.

--Bryce~