Fun Ride

by Robert   Sep 17, 2004


The steel bar is placed over my waist,
and I watch while other run in their place in haste.
My fingers clutch the steel as the machine begins to spin,
and my face forms a gleeful grin.
I am spun with a violent thrust,
and holding on with all I have to trust.
My stomach goes from side to side,
as this machine gives me a hellish ride.
I feel all the food I ate come up,
I can’t believe I may up chuck in this cup.
It spins and spins to no end,
and I hold on tight to my nearest friend.
Then it comes to a head,
and the liquid escaping my mouth is crimson red.
I feel my inside release all the food I store,
sprawling it all on the floor.
My shoes smell of stench that make others gag,
and the operator quickly sets off the warning flag.
The machines stops and my body finally feels the ease,
but my friends never stop the tease.
I grin and wipe my mouth off in jest,
I and tell them I tried to keep my food in for I did my best.
Well I just get a pat on the back and a handy wipe,
and told not the riding type.

Written By
Robert Lee Niswander
Copyright 2004

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  • 16 years ago

    by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life

    Not one of your best... it was not thar funny, mostly digusting. i do like the part where you threw up on their shoes! hahaha now that was funny..
    I think you could have done better..but that's just me...

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    This poems is too good and shouldnt be rated as 3.

    Seriously, not just funny but constructed extremely well. There was no single word that seemed to be off in the poem..

    ANyways, LMAO.....
    I somehow kinda know how it felt..I like rides but one day my bf took me to the park, and i was so excited coz they have a lot of new rides..So i was ok, unil that last ride which my bf warned me about, the last time he tried it, still i forced him to come with me so yeah we ended up hurrying out of the park. Lol and there was this time as well, i got somehow like beaten up and stuff, coz that rides shoke my waist and body extremely much as i was screaming on the top of my lungs and my bf clothes being ripped off..hahaha..

  • 16 years ago

    by Fantasy

    Haha, very interesting. Good flow, and actually pretty amusing.

    Is this a true story? If it is, you are very good at explaining it in a good humor.

    Keep it up!!
    Dollface.

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