by vanessarrr Sep 17, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
That old gray clock arrived at twelve, |
by Jacki
OOHH i really liked this, I seen you had a ghost series as do I so I had to read it. I'm all about these type of poems lol. Anyways I love how you made it rhyme i usually write free verse so this was really nice to read something on a simiular note but different. I liked the style of it and I loved the descriptions of the lighning hitting her face. Can't wait to go onto the next one :) |
by pinkalias
"And bared her bloody piercing gaze" i really like that line. ill be honest, the first two stances were weak, but i really liked the imagery on the last stance, good job |
by Bryce Ellner
Oooo, ghostie story! My favorite ^_^. Sorry I havent been on for a while to check your poetry. I'm well, how about yourself? Anyway, I think I'm going to like this little series. I have a neat little picture in my head of all this happening. Take care~ |
excellent poem, i felt it, you are on my favorites. very good work, keep it up |
by Nefarius
boa, great and with that really good style, yezz and you're just 13 , don't loose that dark path, pleaze ;) |