Just last night

by elena   Sep 18, 2004


I woke up that sunny morning,
i didn't know it would be hell,
because i woke up to the sound,
of the phone ringing like a bell.

i should have never answered,
i should have never cared,
i should have let the machine pick it up,
as if no one was there.

but instead i picked it up,
like it was another happy day,
but the voice on the other end,
was just opposite of that way.

and as he tired to speak,
not many words came out,
so i had no idea,
what he was talking about.

but then he took a breath,
and breathed a heavy sigh,
and told that the night before,
my friend had been shot, and died.

and i stood there frozen cold,
and my mind filled up with fright,
it couldn't be my friend,
that i had talked to just last night.

then i heard the voice,
of my friend still on the phone,
and he told me he'd come over,
so i wouldn't be alone.

so i hung up the phone and sat down,
and stared off into space,
because no one knew that last night,
my friend would meet his fate.

he came over and sat down,
and began to tell the story,
of how my friend was shot and killed,
at midnight, bloody and gory.

he said that it had happened,
of a drug deal gone wrong,
but the criminals were found innocent,
and left to move along.

all this time i sat there,
and i never said a word,
for i knew when they came out,
i would let them be heard.

i hate the boys who did this,
it just isn't fair,
they took away a young mans life,
and didn't even care.

reality sinks in,
and tears stream down my face,
we tried to help him so many times,
but he let someone put him in his place.

(this poem isnt a true story, but the same thing could happen to one of my friends, and i hope this never happens, please read and comment)

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  • 20 years ago

    by elena

    thanks to every1 who is reading my poem! thank u for all the great comments and im glad you all liked it, it was a hard poem for me to write because it was on a touchy subject but i wrote it and u voted to thanks!!!! :-)

  • 20 years ago

    by FireCracker

    AAWW ... that was AWESOME u get a 5 .. check out some of mine sometime, and i gotta tell ya my friend was shot and died and It just really hit me hard ... gr8 job

  • 20 years ago

    by Heather

    this is a great poem and keep writting them cause we all love to read them thanks for sharing it with me it made my day because i have lost a lot of my friends but not in the same way as urs but it is a great poem!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    WOW chilling tale! Im glad its not a true story! Ihave lost many friends to this sort of stuff and its good for you to put out the msg and start warning ppl girl well done!