very nice work! this poem flows along very well. you definately have a talent!

im not really a love poem writter , most of my entries are in the sad catogry . however i do like to read love poems but there not many of those that would entice me to comment..
but this is pretty darn good . ive read it over a few times and i really like it ..
top marks

When you're in love you can really appreciate this poem and im one of the many who loves it.:)

When you're in love you can really appreciate this poem and im one of the many who loves it.:)