this is some free-verse i wrote the night of discovering thoughts about some one i had got high with that day. ended up failing miserably, she said i try to hard, which is true.

I liked "falling in love with the image of a person is easy", but seriously folks, i want soem honest critique on my poems.

It's tough hanging out with girls who are so beautiful and dressed in a manner that robs us Genius fools of the ability to reason. I feel it all the time.

You know what i think of your writing Mr...i ain't very good at spotting flaws unless they are obvious ones so i'm not sure i can give you the criteque you want...but i know quality then i see it.