Your steel room

by August   Sep 19, 2004


Here I rest in piece
The pieces of me
We're on your steel spike
In my abandoned heart

Over there, my feelings
Bled into your chalice
Which I crafted of steel
In my abandoned heart

Things that I said
Lay breathless and scattered
On your steel floor
In my abandoned heart

And my soul remains trapped
(Gift-wrapped for you!)
Rest in your tiny steel box
In my abandoned heart

Hail the Steel Girl!
Steel statue still standing
Forever sterile as steel
In my abandoned heart
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i'm so depressed. rate my poem before i commit suicide

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  • 20 years ago

    by August

    teehee, that just barely contained english. so little that i can't even understand it.

  • 20 years ago

    by August

    just because i posted this in the sad poems does not mean i'm sad right now. she does deserve my affection. i'm talking online with her right now. she was completely understanding about everything and i am proud to have loved her so much. go liza, you rox my sox.

  • 20 years ago

    by August

    Take it too the limit, YEAH!!!!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by August

    oooohhh, this girl did a real number on me. needless to say, but i liked her for about a year and a half. most of that time was spent in futility, known to author.

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