brilliant job. i have tried many times to express the emotion of that day in poems, and am yet to find one of mine acceptable to pay tribute to that horrible day. you did a wonderful job of expressing it. excellent work. just one thing, you may want to edit the word `people` i'm not sure where it is in the poem but it is spelt `peole` or something to that affect, once you fix that up it will be absolutely beautiful.
xnikkix

Good poem, but i personally don't like the presedent very much, which makes me not like the country much either, but what can ya do, ne way, nice poem.
Ben

Nice poem...That Ben really arr-can't find the words-don't want to be kicked out the site..I am so angry i am shaking-he dissed our country in a 9/11 poem--that is the worst thing a person can do!
I have a poem like this sort of called "the eye of a child" can you read it and tell me what you think?

Hey nice poem Ben stinks! ANYWAY, lol um, hey check ou tmy poems and tell me what you think....kk? bye