great poem....beautifully expresses theres a thin line btw life and reality

Awesome poem Ben..so deep and meaningful..When you write..it's limke you put the emotions right into my heart and mind and i can feel your pain and all that..Awesome job <3
-Mort
xxTakeCarexx

beautifully written, so deep and emotional, i loved it, absolutely awesome job.
xnikkix

Diggin the romanticness of it all... even tho its sad... its still romatic for a guy to have such heart felt feelings! hehe... 5's all around!!

wow! this is very good and written beautifully.