Very talented and TRUE poetry. Unlike many others on this site. 5!

amazingly written ^.^

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed this, of course, I can relate to this, as I am sure everyone can. Take care, and I hope to read more soon.

Aw this is very touching....5/5!

Excellent poem. I really enjoyed reading this! Keep up the good work! :)
Felicia

I've never seen a poem of this genre written in that style, and it works really well. One of the best poems of its sort I've seen.

Wow..this is really good! 5/5 for sure! i really like this poem...great job
Thanks for the comment
Becky
xoxo

I love this poem, Micheal. Great sense of repitition, it's on of the few poems where it actually sounds great.

Take Care,
Renee

WOW....just simply amazing.

Very neat rhyme scheme it took me quite a few times of reading through to finally get how you did that but i got it and i think it was neat. cute poem. great message although i think im either to young or to dumb to entirely get it but i think i understand. good job.

Awh, I loveee this poem. It's soo true too. I really love the flow of it. Greattt job. ^.^

WOW! it's brilliant and i absolutely loved it!

Really nice

Nice flow. I liked your repetition of some of the lines, it fits in really well.

I love the way you word this poem and the way it expresses feelings. It is quite relatable to and written very well. A wonderful job!

-Tainted Mikochan

Wow, awsome write!!! 5/5 very well written

In the wake of your wound, I feel ecstasy
My soul flies much higher than a sparrow
Cupid, you tainted angel, are you teasing me?

these lines are especially beautiful. very nicely written.

shobhana

shi

I'm almost speechless as to how talented you are, and how wonderful your poems are! they flows so amazingly! your words are deep, which carry so many emotions! i really loved reading your work!
luv em

Love it, the way the ?'s add to the feeling of repitition I get from it and its a nice break from the ordinary.

I'm not even sure what to say. This poem was so beautiful, I loved it. Great job.
5/5 for sure
Breanna