I love the questions you pose in the poem and the repititon of the last line in each stanza. interesting interpretation of teasing love. loved it all the way. brilliantly penned. 5/5

All i wanted to say is you are a great and true writter. Its contains lot of deep meaning in it. Very good poem and i really liked ur work. keep up!

Awesome, and I was speechless as well. The flow was beautiful. I loved it.
5/5

VERY WELL WRITTEN!!
5/5
GREAT POEM I LOVE IT!
I LOVE THE CONSISTANT 'E' RHYMING..
GREAT JOB!

I like this one because it isn't describing somehting sexual. It is describing the feelings that comes with being a human and the things that tempt us. Great work!

Good poem, I liked the wording. The wording that you used was great. I liked the format that you used. I gave this poem a 5/5.

I love this poem the most from everything i have heard from you. my favorite stanza

"Cupid, you tainted angel, are you teasing me?
Piercing my heart with your illusive arrow?
How could my foolish desire be pleasing thee?"

has so much to say! amazing truly amazing 5/5

Cool..i like this one....very interesting:D

This is absolutely fab. Shows the feeling that come with lust/love..