Very nice poem.. 5/5

Wow...I loved the message...great poem...amazing write....

Emma 5/5

This was a great poem. And I really liked the last two lines. You used the rhyme scheme AABB and it worked out really well. None of the poem seemed forced at all. Awesome job! 5/5

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Whoa dude, that was really awesome, that deserved a 5 straight up, good job dude!! i'd give it a 50 if i can.

Very well written.i'm not much into the god world.but i must say,it captured me.from start to end.-lexie

Wow, it is so great. your all poems are so great and perfect.I'm glad i found your page and had a chance to read them. perfect poems.

Great poem. i liked how there was a last little message at the end there. this poem really moved well probably cause each line was between 7 and ten syllables so they matched up well.

Wow great write and the statement so true! It really was very good, great structure and flow.

-ann

An iteresting write. Although I tend to find in this day and age we look to blame external sources (parents, work, society, government) before we turn on those closest to us. But I do see the point of the last two lines in the teaching. Well put.

Haha.. Very cute poem. I love how you can relate everything to god or the Bible. A really good job, here. Thanks for sharing.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Excellent poem, and message. we all need to realize that we are accountable for our own actions,maybe we would be a little more careful how we treat others.

Man you're really good at this stuff.. keep it up!

Easy read, great message. A very thoughtful write. I like it!

Two years passed, and that shows how strong your poem is still. Yes, blame is what blame does.. An insightful poem. Well done. xx

I love the theme running through this and can relate to your style as i think mine is quite similar in other words i like to rhyme my poems as you do

terrific write
5/5
John

Wow, this was amazingly deep.. The descripitons were wonderful.. And the poem itself so well thought out.. Truly brilliant work! 5/5

Wow... purely amazing

I know why this has 70 comments, it's one of THE best written poems I have seen featured on this website. Awesome!

Interesting.. glad i kept reading. i almost didn't because i usually don't understand religion poems because i myself am not religious. but i like this one. it's more complex than i expected.
"Most will look to their side to cast the blame"
my favorite line. too true.

Nicely thought out!