I just wanted to say, you did an awesome job. Hinestly and truley. I myself am not really religous and yet I felt a great deal of knowledge from your poem

O i loved this, it was beautiful! very touching, and true, great job 5/5

Great job! I love to read poems that tell a story and flow as well as yours do.

I really like this poem thank you for the commments love linda

I liked this poem a lot it was a really good write nice job

An excellently written poem, you truly have a talent, keep up the superb work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

This makes me want to read the Bible...great job 5/5

Thats an incredible poem, i love the ending of it because it could either be taken as we blame the next person on or we pass the blame to woman, or we pass the blame to a weaker individual or anything.
the ryhmes were perfect and it flowed so well. I wish i could write like this, incredible and powerful. wow

Excellent write well pinned and the flow was great ,love the story lot of meaning , great job, ~5/5~ your friend Tracy

Beautifully penned poem! You're really talented! the flow was flawless fantastic work! Excellent choice of words! 5/5! as always

Very nice write, well thought out! perfectly penned!!!
god bless
5/5

I love this poem its going into my favorites. great work with such a movie truth of life. keep in touch

I love this one :) u get a 5\5
i just started to do poems
maybe when ever you get the time com see my poems and give me sum tips :D

Wow... Great Poem

This poem is beautiful. Nice rhymes, beautiful imagery and a lesson in one. I strive to write like this and move readers. Pls. read my poetry and tell me what you think of them.

This reminds me of when I went to the Creation Museum.

I don't know if you've ever heard of that place but it was amazing to see a museum for God's creation.

but yah, I love it, its beautifully written.

Holy cow you are an awesome writer keep up the good work...always Manda...hey you can check out my poems too

I love how you're unique and use such detail in your work

Beautiful poem

Wow.. that was great! It's always good to hear a change in what people right about. Most people like me, focus on drastic disasters or depressing situations, but it's always nice to read something inspiring!