Okay i really did like this poem...(altho i am not christian) but the ending turns to be true 99.99999% of the time. at least in my opinion. great rhyme scheme. and good chocie of words all in all a 5/5

It was great. I actually started to write a poem about the beginning yesterday. I didn't finish it though. I actually and no idea what I was writing about. Just the beginning of something. You don't have to read anymore poems of mine if you do not wish to. Now I'm just reading for pleasure because you seem to be very talented so far. Five.

5/5 excellent poem well done
posted my first poem yesterday would love
honest opinion

This poem is amazing
i know the story of adam and eve well!
This is what it would be like if it was written as a poem!

the rhythm of the poem just flows from the tounge... when i was reading it, it felt like i was reading it aloud

in total i read it 4 times, because it was so good!

definatly keep writting more like this
(your going onto my favs)

You have an amazing talent. I love the words you use when you are writing and the emotion and how you wisely use your words.
Very well done.
<3Tay
5/5

Excellent poem
I have read your poem and it touched my heart.Kindly read my poem as well,it is my first poem in this forum,please read it and comment and rank it.Your words are very precious for me.
Thanks
Junaid

This is amazing, nothing else to say. The poem speaks for itself. 5/5. Added it to my favorites.

Nice poem....
Read my peom "Child Beggar Noshi"
Rate and comment it,to let me know how you took it while reading

I love this piece when reading my bible I have never really been able to picture this in my head but through your poem I have been able to your words and your flow was well thought out. 5/5

Wow great poem... its like a story and then the moral of it at the end... i really enjoyed this =D

Well, that is so very true. It is human nature to cast off the blame. This is very well writte. Thanks for a great read!

Very true, but still fact or fiction?? hehe...jk great and excellent poem...

I loved it. very beautiful. thank you for commenting on mine, as i really appreciate it.
again, love it.
5/5

Unbelievable,
tells the story of Adam and Eve perfectly with grace and beauty.

keep up the great work.
god bless
-chris

Wow! That was such a great poem that you wrote about Adam and Eve. It was very professional. I will add this one to my faves! 5/5

This poem is amazing! I am speechless. It gave me chills. You words amazingly! I love it. The message everything!
Keep writing. You are great!
~Kayla

That was awesome..
keep up the good work. :)

Thanks for commenting my poem about my friend.
you wrote a very in depth poem,i loved it!what a hard topic to write about huh?only true talent can do it so well. =]
lexie

The first of the many poems of yours i shall read, I rather enjoyed that poem. You took a bible story and made it fresh. I am very glad to see a very well thought out, structured poem, that carries its thought to the very end. The rhyme scheme was unforced, the rhythm was sound, and the theme brilliant. I am glad to put you on my favorites list for this one.

5/5 btw