by Ben Sep 20, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
love is
As the rain pats on my window, |
by holly
This was beautiful |
you really fell for this girl huh? it's sweet...ah, the the wonderful times in love...I hear it can be worth the painful parts in love.... Beautiful work. |
wow this is a very inspiring poem, who ever this girl is, well she is very lucky indeed. u have a beautiful talent. never give up ben. |
by BeeBeeGun
awesome i like it very beautiful |
Very mature language! hehe yeah this poems beautiful i have 2 agree. |