Places in the dark

by Timothy   Sep 20, 2004


Come with me, my deteriorating child,
We will be trekking far into the wild;
The curtains rustle in the nighttime breeze,
As we step off the sill and glide over the trees.

I am the Soul Collector, with the skeleton grin,
Our journey into desolation is about to begin;
Wrapped in my dark and tattered shroud,
We soar beyond the clouds.

The Earth is left to her own devices,
Now the Shadow World entices;
The gloom here is beyond damnation,
This is the point that the day and the night have a separation.

Despair reigns here, for there is nothing else,
These places in the dark that leave cuts, bruises, and welts;
You think it is Hell, but my friend, that is false,
Because you yet have a pulse!

Only the most distraught find me and my places in the dark,
People with suicidal thoughts and murderers with a conscience; they do embark;
When you awake in your bed, drowning in perspiration,
Only then do you begin to realize the degree of your desperation.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Timothy

    Thank you Tamara, thank you Samerz

  • 20 years ago

    by Samie

    dude kickass...u sound like mee with a alot more vocabalry...lol...keep going yo...
    ROCK ON!!!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Tamara Talcott

    i think that the vivid vocabulary of this peice brings it to life good work keep it up i like it :-)

  • 20 years ago

    by Johnny V

    It sounds very nice, good rhythm, very talented.

  • 20 years ago

    by jamie25

    wow! very nice! i liked this alot!