Simply awesome-are you a vampire?
or...lol cool poetry

wow! very nice! i liked this alot!

It sounds very nice, good rhythm, very talented.

i think that the vivid vocabulary of this peice brings it to life good work keep it up i like it :-)

dude kickass...u sound like mee with a alot more vocabalry...lol...keep going yo...
ROCK ON!!!!!

Thank you Tamara, thank you Samerz