Comments : Foundations

  • 20 years ago

    by Mild insomnia

    :'(

  • 20 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    A very good poem. Loved it! =) Keep it up and take care!

    ~Grace

  • 20 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    hey Liam...this was great poem...Ckeck my poem "Heart of Mine"...5/5 Keep it up:)!!!

    **xxxxSedushaxxxx**

  • 20 years ago

    by August

    "4". you managed to bring about a fine ending BUT the begining seemed devoid of something.

  • 20 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Very beautifully written poem will lot of emotions put into it...Keep them coming...Ur really talented...take care...FIVE>>>