Hey, another great poem. i like the things you choose to write about. i loved the second stanza especially the thing about "reality" being changeable. personally i don't believe anything these days. everyone's got an agenda. maybe you should put this is life, society. just a suggestion- tc. xmollyxx |
by Eibutsina
Hey I was intrigued to come and check your profile - you write about alot of the same things i do - only your really good at it LoL You have such a way with words and i really enjoyed reading this poem - mainly for the fact that you haven't tried to hide any realism of the facts, but spoke them so elequently! Anyways a wonderful poem - im off to read more! |
by vanessarrr
so true. seems simple. yet complicated. that's how i saw your poem. it's like straight out honesty. i like that. take care:) |
Really awe inspiring....u r te finest poet on the site |
by Dani Ward
wow, that was awesome. |
by PAUL HEWSON
su fukin perb ... 5 |
by PAUL HEWSON
Reality is changeable |
by N J Thornton
Great descriptions and quite scary. Sorry i can't give a better comment. I'll try and get back to this poem, i'm just a little busy at the moment. |
by NIKKI
That was great. Really inspiring ur 1 of the best writters on this site. |
by Midnight Sky
Long but good 5\5 :) |