A very lovely poem....You amaze me with your words..Love, Tim

HEY WTG NICE POEM AND KEEP IT UP
L8ERZZZ

A poem fullfilled with such emotion! It was very sweet :) I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing. Check out my poems sometimes eh, I cherish your comments =) (Sorry that I havent called, been busy with a few things recently but thats no excuse! :(..

Im glad to hear that you are doing well from the poem, but keep in touch yea? Email or something! lol bye hun. Take Care, much love to you. Jessica xxxx

Yeh, me again :/ Sorry, but lol I was going through my comments on my older poems and seen your comments from yesterday! lol thanks for the comments sweety. I understand about the "being happy dont wanna read depressing stuf" Not a problem :) I wouldnt want to either. Take Care of yourself. Smile =) Once again, Great poem!!

Absolutely beautiful, Kayla!

smooth ending

another great write...i'm enjoying reading ur poems...keep them coming....take care...FIVE>>>

Exellent poem showed such emotion I like that! Very well done! Take Care Brooke!

aww...sounds like true love. Beautiful work. This one flows so well...esp the beginning.

xxx