Dark Everlasting

Wow this is really good.

I'm running out of poems to read! This poem seems to be different than your other ones, the structure. Good job

I don't know if this poem was supposed to but it sent shivers up my spin. And gave me goose bumps. I don't know why, but it did, and this poem was amazing. I enjoyed it quiet abit.

Last stanza, third line. You could write 'alright' instead of having it broken into 'all' & 'right'.

Awesome poem, the rhymes in this one were pleasant to read. I liked waiting and wondering, when will it come next! Although it seemed like it was all over the place, I liked that idea. It made this poem interesting. I liked :)

"So the words, they stick,
they're stuck, I'm out of luck,
they won't flow."

That is exactly what I am feeling right now, and it's ironic, because I couldn't put it into words... You did! It's great to be able to read someone elses poetry and know that you can relate.