Okay, whoa.... at first i thought it was the lost of inspiration right but somehow, SOMEHOW, i figured it could be something else. like a relationship you have with someone else?
So wise beyond our years ;-)
Aken Sol

Deep write sean. It reminds me of coming home at the end of a bad day, one you want to forget about, but your brain won't let go. You go over all the should of's and could of's *regets* The only relief you get is sleep *darkness*...that's just my take on this write. Excellent write dude;)

Bravo!....great work the world needs people who can write like you, thank you for sharing

I thought of the same thing Kevin J did when I read it. I can relate to it and dwell on it.

I like it, you rythme very well, the only problem that I see is that the fluency is occasionally lost. But other than that it's wonderful ^_^

Man that was deep i read it a couple of times very thought provoking

Very good...i really like yout style of writeing....sorry i really dontk now what else to say so ....very good...5/5 ha

"So the words, they stick,
they're stuck, I'm out of luck,
they won't flow."

That is exactly what I am feeling right now, and it's ironic, because I couldn't put it into words... You did! It's great to be able to read someone elses poetry and know that you can relate.

Last stanza, third line. You could write 'alright' instead of having it broken into 'all' & 'right'.

Awesome poem, the rhymes in this one were pleasant to read. I liked waiting and wondering, when will it come next! Although it seemed like it was all over the place, I liked that idea. It made this poem interesting. I liked :)

I don't know if this poem was supposed to but it sent shivers up my spin. And gave me goose bumps. I don't know why, but it did, and this poem was amazing. I enjoyed it quiet abit.

I'm running out of poems to read! This poem seems to be different than your other ones, the structure. Good job

Wow this is really good.