A New Feeling

by Heather Clark   Sep 20, 2004


I've only known you for a minute
but in that minute
you've made me feel complete
it doesn't make sense
and i don't think it will
all i know
is my loneliness fades
in your presence

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  • 20 years ago

    by Heather Clark

    Thank you very much, i really don't like short poems either and i sometimes worry that mine may seem unfinished, i appriciate all of your encouraging words.

  • 20 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Alot of your poetry is very short (well in comparison to mine anyways lol) and usually i dont like short poems cause i feel like they are missing something, or unfinished or part of a story hasn't been told - i actually enjoy your short pieces and dont feel this way about your short poems - you seem to have quite a talent for it keep it up! Eirisa xoxox

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