Hmm really made me think this one - i had to read it a few times but its really subtle, short but i find it a very strong piece also.....full of short changed emotional bursts! Great write girl and thanks for your comments on my poem.....i always return the favour
Luv Eirisa xxoo

yeah i'll admit this poem isn't one of the best, but when i originally wrote this in april i was just trying to sum of the feelings i had,