whoa that's awesomeness! So meaningful. I loved it, honestly! Amazing job yet again Ben, you're incredible..<333 xxxx
-Mortalidaga
xxxTakeCarexxx

Wow. This poem was very deep, I absolutely loved it! =) Keep up the great writing and take care!

~Grace

I think it's great. It really touches the meaning of hate. We share hate, we bring it...we created it. I love the way you addressed it. Way to go!

i love this. put it in life, society- thats where it belongs. but yeah brilliant poem. very deep, very true. xmollyxx

Yep i agree with Molly - should be in society ANYWAYS a fantastic interpretation of the black hatred that slowly consumes our world and society

Eirisa xoxo

Thanxs every one for your nice comment.
Ben

Actually im just talking about hate in general, so in a way i spose it covers way as well, im not that wise, but thank you.
Ben

i think that was bloody briliant and i gave u a 5. hey keep it up and never give up faith. and u can read some of mine sometime and see what u think/

-faithfulserenity

Good write. Great lines and words. It was a bit strange but cool anyway.
~DFTI