okay good poem.excellent but i kinda fixed it up a lil bit so it would be better im not saying it was bad before so dont take it the wrong way...

***Laying here alone in my bed

Thinking of every little word you
had said.

My vision becomes cloudy

As I start to cry

I'm still so confused

I really never understood why

You say you love me more

But you love her too

But yet, you still can't choose

Now tell me, what am I supposed
to do

You broke my heart so many
times before

So what do I do now?

When I love someone I will love
for the rest of my life

When I will never get over and how

how we should have lasted,
but
it just didn't turn out right?

How can I show you how much it
really hurts?

with all these tears i cry at night

Just thinking of how happy we
could be,
if you had just left her
behind

I breathe in and tell myself
everyday,
you will never leave my mind

Some way things must get better

But the fact still remains

I shall forever be lost and
confused

all becuz the love i had for you will never be the same***

so i was just helping a lil bit so like dont get mad or anything lol cuz yea but i was just helping u out but good poem i loved it!!! check out mine!!!thanks

Lots of love.....Nicole