AWWW!!! Now wasnt that just the cutest?!!??!! Oh my gosh that could be in a card! That was so cute Eirisa and so sweet of you to write to her..I hope she enjoyed it cause i thought it was Great!! You do an awsome Job girl!! Well worth that five!

another awesome peom by you gurl of course, ur such an awesome poet it blows me away .. and I still LOVE my poem you wrote for me "accept my call" / still cherish it and always will ! YIKES ! lol .. Well I called him but I'll email you ALL about it lata .. cuz where I am its like 3 in the mornin and im tired as hell and its gonna be a long ass email cuz u kno ur my gurl .. haha .. This poem was like the cutest and it was da best of course not as good as "accept my calls" but definately a gr8 one, u write so beautiful and your wording is just totally and completely flawless .. keep it up gurl and ur goin to get some where wit ur writin i know it .. Lol ... ! ! ! Check out my new post(s) I added like two or three more , so Im hoping to see what you think .. cuz ur like the one person who knows the story behind the poem .. ya know what i mean ? Well of course u do cuz ur my gurl ! lol .. ! Awesome Job with this one and for all of them .. GR8 WORK ! And, Hope to hear from ya soon .. Lol .. ! TTYL .. LYLAS GURLIE !
=) Love ,
Your Fav ...
Britt AkA Maybeth .. !
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I have to say this is not a poem that i can comment about with personal experience, my best friend from those years ago has drifted from me and i still see him on occasion we have grown without the influence of each other...
But i somewhat drifted off there, well written poem and obvious intent.
With a hint of hypocrisy i must say to hold onto your friends but i don’t really think you need to be told...
It’s nice to notice how you have merged congratulations, love and growing up/experiences into one for this poem. Great work.

Thanks to all you ladies - my girls :o) your comments are always so welcome and valued!

Semaran - so glad you came and checked out my new poems hun will email you!

Luv Eirisa xoxo

Another great poem... I'de read more today.. But it's 2 am here and i'm getting tired.. But your poem.. Is great again... Far far better than me... But hey now i have something to work towards... We keep up the awesome work... though i'm sure you will
Take Care
Angel

Not even girl - i really admire the uniqueness of your poetry its got such originality printed all over it and thanks so much for your kind words!