I don't know if this poem makes sense to everyone that reads it, but I wrote it a long time ago, and I always thought it summed up my feelings at the time, but please tell me what you think.

i love it! its realli good!

I absolutly loved it, and I could feel the emotion and all...marvelous job darling. So sad...Heart wrenching..I hope to hear more from you soon, I've missed your beautiful work. Excellent job hun <3 I can't explain how much I adore your work. I loved it. You're so talented! <3
-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx
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Glad to hear from you again :) <3 xx

hey i really liked it and it makes total sense to me it'z and sadheart breaker but it'z nice because it comes strsight from your heart and thats all that really matters take care
-_-_-_-~**ShAnEeSe**~_-_-_-

Aww Bryan this poem was awesome! Keep it up and take care!

~Grace

Hey Bryan, I think this poem is absolutely BEAUTIFUL!! Great flow and words...just beautiful.

Hi, you made a relli kind comment on one of my poems a while ago so thort i would check out your poems, and this poem is absolutely amazing!!! It actually made me cry because i have just come back from my grandmas funeral, ironic!

Anyway I won't waffle on much more, but I just wanted u to know that i think you are so talented, ive read all of ur poems and this one especially really touched me. If you ever want to chat or anything send me a private message

Luv Toni xx