Nice poem, I liked it, the pattern was different to most other poems. I don't think it's bad at all!

WOW..this poem is amazing!! its not bad at all!!! i can relate to alot in this poem!! wonderful job!!!

I think it was a very good poem I couldrelate to it a lot but that might not be a god thing. Well you're an excelent poet keep writing

a couragious self expression. smooth poetic flow

i love to sit and just write what comes out , it maynot make any sence to anyone else but i enjoy it , it helps me to deal with feelings . if poetry is (as i percieve it to be ) a way of expressions then therefore there is no good or bad poetry .. its just poetry ..
so thank you for sharing with us .. i have read some of your other works and some are v v good indeed ..

This was an amazing poem, hun. I know it's hard...but that's life I guess. I enjoyed this very much, the pattern and verses were very unique. We're here for you, whenever you need a hand to pull you back up on your feet. Lots of love, always, anytime.

Strength §

excellent you are an awesome poet i felt your pain, its just like..........me

I love this poem. The emotion just screams to me. Keep up the excellent work. You have a lot of talent.

I really like this poem

I love this poem, it's great hun

wow.....

This poem was amazing it gave me the chills! I was shivering the whole time I read this it amazed me how much I felt the poem as I read it. Trust me it's a great poem I can't find any other words for this poem just that I LOVE IT. It has got to be one of the best poems I have read. Keep it up.

Love, Taylor

Nice poem, Im kindof the same way thats why i write and express myself :-) You should read some of my poems :-) "Her Story" is a good one as well as "Dying for You" Both are true in thier own way - Happy reading!

if this is about you, i have news, your better than you think you are, i can tell just by your poetry

damn girl! this is an awesome piece of writin, ur gifted!!! wow!!! can relate to wut u say, somehow its wut i have always tried to say n cudnt find da words to explain myself straight.. this does rly speak to my heart, thank u, love, *Zayda*