James, that is such a sweet poem! It's written well, and it seems truly heartfelt, like a girl you loved left u on the very day that you wrote it. Nice work! Thanks for the awesome comments on mine, feel free to put some more:P. lol. talk to u later

Totally loved the poem James, I felt the love you have for her.
Reminded me of the feelings I have.
Loved it!
Laterz,
Shirlz

Well i though to was beautiful.