Remember me

by Jackie Prahl   Sep 22, 2004


Remember me
don't let me turn away
find me
save me from this day
care for me
as I do for you
show me I'm not alone
tell me I mean something...
like you
remind me of the important things
like hope, and all our special times
am I invisible to you
cant you see the darkness around me,how I'm bleeding,
crying, smiling as if nothings wrong
wont you pull me out of the darkness
I've put myself in once again
show me I'm more than nothing to you
tell me you care
cause no one else does
tell me your a friend
that its not the end
tell me you love me
cause I love you
without any of this I wonder
If I died today
would I be remembered
I'm asking you
that if you cant help me, or care for me
at least Remember me

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  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    great poem!! lots of emotion..nicely writte..keep ya head up!!

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    i loved this poem, good job, i liked the way it flowed...

    keep writing..
    xox
    Samz~*

  • 20 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Ummm in TOTAL disbelief that no one else has commented on this piece! Okay firstly i loved the rhythm, the short statements made your poem really effective in expressing those deep emotions....just some advice make sure you sort of write it how you want it to be read...if you dont understand email me hun happy to help...but yeah besides that was a very unique poem full of emotion and a pleasure to read - well worth the 5!
    Eirisa xoxox

  • 20 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Hey! just wanted to say thanks for reading my poem "I wish i could be like the rest" and i wanted to return the favor..I thought this was a really nice peice of work you have here and i wanted to say I am sorry for the depression your going through and i hope all will be well!! Nice JOb!

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    awww! very good poem! i love it.

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