by Cantchangeme
Excellent poem, it reveals the horrors and evils of the world that happen on a day to day bassis, truly awesome inspiring poem you have a nack for them |
by Allen
Great write, strong and truthful message, this world is messed up!!! This poem is not pleasent to read but that's only because the content is so true... and there is nothing we can do to change it :(.... Never the less, this poem is very well written... oh yeah, you might want to fix the ? marks in it, have a read and you'll see what I mean :) take care. |