I like it, but I feel like the ending wasn't really an ending...iono for some reason "numb" just doesn't end it for me. I liked the rhyme scheme, but sometimes the fourth line was so much longer then the others that it sorta threw me off. but then again, all of the fourth lines are a bit long, so that is sorta a part of the poem in and of itself. Good work. <btw I liked the symbolism, but it was a bit blatant, I'm sure you could tone it down and people would still get it>

Excellent poem...don't really know what else to say because that totally wraps it up!

nice kenny