Forgotten Soul

by HOLLY ARMER   Sep 23, 2004


My bleeding heart and shattered dreams.
Unanswered wishes torn at the seams.

Hope dangling in the stale, dead air.
Hatred shadowing my vacant stare.

Existence lost...my being gone.
Disappearing within the morning dawn.

Evaporating like an unseen tear.
Memories vanish, was I ever here?

Darkness surrounds me, turning red.
A forgotten soul hangs by a thread.

Take the scissors, cut the strings.
Unable to fall with demon wings.

There's no escape, caught in flight.
Taking me under, deep in the night.

Shadows dancing, black as coal.
As entrancing evil swallows me whole!

*Any vote/comments appreciated*

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  • 20 years ago

    by pinkalias

    wow, another gr8 one. i loved the second line, the symbolism you use is perfect for what your trying to describe.
    " Evaporating like an unseen tear.
    Memories vanish, was I ever here?"
    i love the symbolism "unseen tear" it means so much when you compare it to real life, good job

  • 20 years ago

    by Jennifer Fox or Jackson

    This poem was so awesome...I fell in love with it!! Keep up the great work...Chows 4 now...Jennie

  • 20 years ago

    by mazzy

    wow well dun very good
    mazzy
    xoxoxoxox

  • 20 years ago

    by Nat-a-Tat

    Wow that was an amazing poem I really like it!!

  • 20 years ago

    by FireCracker

    gr8 poem, i really loved it, WOW ! ! AWESOME JOB .. and keep it up, check out my poems sometime if u get a chance .. !
    =)

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