Very Romantic Poem...keep them coming...Take care...FIVE

thanku 4 ur comment! luv Toni xx

you used darlin'....in a poem. i' doe' no' belon'.

GOOD POEM

hey i think this is a very good poem and hope u submit more cause i would like to read more of them

A well crafted poem. I love how your rhyme scheme flowed throughout the piece, which made it a pleasure to ride. Never stop writing!!! :)

Thanku all so much 4 ur comments! They really kind :-) I hope he gets better soon too. + rebecca yeah i think u shud get back wiv him!

Luv Toni

xxx

you have a very lucky boyfriend .. u must love him a lot . this poem is without doubt the best i have read so far on this site .. maybe it appeals to me because i have endured depression for a long time .. your style is good the poem is awesome . beat of luck . and im gonna check out some of your other work now.. def 5

great poem now how he feels some times.

5/5

terry

hey i really like this poem it touched me in a very special way keep write that POEM WAS GREAT.....shaneese.....

wow, that was awesome. i loved it.

Very good read ienjoyed it fully keep up the good work

This is a great poem. I was depressed, and if only my boyfriend had noticed, I think we might have stuck together...but he didn't know, and all I needed was someone to care. I think you're poem is amazing, tell your boyfriend to keep hanging in there, life is full of good things when you've survived depression...and it'll be easier for him, too, because he's got you. Great job.
-Stef

That's wonderful you probably are the best girlfriend. If has a depression problem

I THINK YOU CURED IT
EXCELLENT!!!

whoa...i really loved ur poem, it reaches out to meh... id love to hear more of yourz..
sam

Hi, thanku all SO SO much for ur commentz, it means so much! Im going to show my bf the poem tonight. I jus hope he getz better soon, it hurts to see him so upset. Thanku tho again, all of u! I will check out ALL your poems, thanku xxxxx Toni

Oh girl - this was fantasic - did you give it too him? I hope so cause this poem just blew me away - it was so selfless and full of love, committment and devotion and i could kinda relate to it from where your standing also...

Anyways a pleasure to read - keep up the great work

Much Luv Eirisa xoxo

Absolutely Beautiful and just breathtaking. Great job! lol

Hi, thanku agaain for all ur comments! I showed him the poem and managed to persuade him to submit sum of his on this site, I jus wondered, if any of you read this, if u cud check out some of his poems. I told him he wud get sum support here too. Only if u have time tho, id reli appeciate it, and he wud too i think :-) thanku all again xxxxxx much love, toni

woops i forgot to add somethin, his profile name thing is 'alien242k' and one of his poems is called 'our love is too strong to break' - if u need to look it up :-) thanks again, love to u all xxxx