Goodbye

by Ben   Sep 23, 2004


I saw u there today,
Lying silent, cold and still.
It's not how I remember you,
But I'm afraid its how I will.

I'm going to say goodbye tomorrow,
And let you fly away.
You left me way to early Kel,
I wish that u could stay.

I miss you already,
I cry for you Kel.
Why did you have to go,
And put me through this hell.

People say their sorry,
The say they know how I feel.
They didn't even know you,
To them this is not real.

Why did you have to leave me,
You hadn't lived your life.
You were taken all so quickly,
The pain cuts me like a knife.

I turned and walked away from you,
And saw your friends outside.
They were all in tears Kel,
All of them had cried.

Today was the last time I saw you,
Lying silent, cold and still.
It's not how I remember you,
But I'm afraid its how I will…

I wrote this poem about the day before my sisters funeral. Please let me know what you think. Thankyou.

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  • 20 years ago

    by xCrImSoNxTeArSx

    I'm so sorry to hear about the loss of your sister. In your poem it seems like you really cared about her. I hope your ok now.
    mwa!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Tianna

    I'm so sorry,
    it sucks loosing someone you love, i know i lost my mom she was my best friend in the world, but they are in a better place now.
    take care