by Stumbling Shaman Sep 23, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I can't feel but I keep on breathing |
by RedRose
Very nice, it reminds of Edgar Allan Poe for some reason. may be the flow of rhyme is similar, in my opinon. Nicely done |
by Kurosenpai
Thanks so much for the comment and great honesty. |
Terrific job. Keep it up!! Loved the poem. |
by Kris Lynn
Definately GOOD!!! I like it. You put it into great context making it easy to understand. Keep it up. |