Comments : Delusion

  • 20 years ago

    by Kris Lynn

    Definately GOOD!!! I like it. You put it into great context making it easy to understand. Keep it up.
    ~*~Christina~*~

  • 20 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Terrific job. Keep it up!! Loved the poem.

    Ashley

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurosenpai

    Thanks so much for the comment and great honesty.
    I love this piece great work.
    Continue the same the name is gentlemen1 and now you know the name.

  • 18 years ago

    by RedRose

    Very nice, it reminds of Edgar Allan Poe for some reason. may be the flow of rhyme is similar, in my opinon. Nicely done