Starlit beauty (my first poem)

by chavii   Sep 23, 2004


Once i woke in the middle of night
looked through the window up in the sky.....
and saw the beauty of vast starlit sky,
looking like a newly wedded bride.
no womens beauty was comparable
with the gorgeous looks of the sky.
i stood there motionless admiring
the indescribable beauty of the night .

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    It's beautiful.. just like what you're trying so hard to describe.
    Wow, for a first poem, this is amazing..
    Kudos m'dear
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Oh that was so sweet dear. i love reading ur poems.
    and thanx a lot 4 commenting on my poems.
    take care
    bharti

  • 19 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Wow... that was a really good comparison... ur a talented writer.. as always... good work

    Love,
    Ipsita

  • 19 years ago

    by Megha

    hey, nice poem!

  • 20 years ago

    by Kris Lynn

    Good poem, but to much of a use of the word sky.
    ~*~Christina~*~

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