Very good poem about love...it was a great pleasure reading this poem...Take care and FIVE...

very good poem.

What a wonderful tender love story. Emotion and honesty leaped from everyword.
Beautifully constructed and inexorable paced.

Please check out my work I would be very interested to see what you think. Thanks.

I have read all off your other pieces and really enjoy them.

Kind regards
Hayley

Very good it really flowed well and had alot to say I was very pleased. If you get a chance check out define love and give me your take on it will you keep writing

i like it its touching

I LIKE THE RYMING IN THIS POEM!

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