This Place*

by Broken Tears   Sep 23, 2004


I'm alone in this place
Are you still there
I can't see anyone
Doesn't some one care

I faintly remember you
But it's been so long
You could really exist
But I might be wrong

Please turn on the light
If your keeping me in the dark
Please turn on the heater
Before the cold leaves its mark

I need to be rescued
Some one come save me
Dying is an option
But living is just maybe

I want to leave this place
And never come back
I want to feel the heat
On my cold hard back

But I'm doomed here forever
Because you left me behind
I'll never feel love again
In this darkness I'm blind

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  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    great poem! so far i love all of your poetry, you are very talented keep it up!

  • 20 years ago

    by beaver

    another very good one. well done.

  • Thats so sad.. I hope its not a true experience. If so then take care. You are very talented. You know to express the feelings very well. I am enjoying reading your works.